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Mary Kathryn Dunlop's avatar

What a tale!

Isabella Mindak's avatar

Great story, great writing, great teaser at the end. Looking forward to the rest. Thanks for sharing.

Anna C Rumin's avatar

the account of being thrown in jail is priceless

Paula Halpin's avatar

What a wonderfully written account of "experiencing youthful folly". Thank you Bryan.

Jinks Hoffmann's avatar

I especially love that you couldn't put the car in reverse. Surely there was some fortune teller from up high letting you know something important?

Bryan Demchinsky's avatar

Yes, it was a sign that it was time to get out of Mexico (and join the circus).

Jinks Hoffmann's avatar

Were you trapeze artists?

Bryan Demchinsky's avatar

More of a clown, as it turned out.

Jill Swenson's avatar

From the first paragraph, I recognized this wonderful story I'd previously read and didn't notice it came from A CONSIDERABLE AGE and not directly rom Bryan Demchinsky. Great to see his great writing recognized.

Karen Zey's avatar

Great take of youthful adventure.

Ruth Miller's avatar

Ah youth! Such a delightful story.

Kristin Shannon's avatar

Can’t wait for the next one, Bryan. And when’s your next road trip?

david dussault's avatar

Great read, Bryan. There is an "Easy Rider" vibe to it without the sad ending. As for your 383 cu.in. Dodge engine - it was indeed a " beast". Keep the stories coming, please.

Lena Samson's avatar

What a fabulous engaging story!