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Michèle RdeC's avatar

Lovely, lovely story. thank you!

Catherine Jarvis's avatar

Beautifully written.

Susie Kaufman's avatar

This is an elegant, mysterious story. I could see you there amid the semicolons, but in the end it felt like fiction of a high order. We don't ever really know who Prof. Browne is, what his motives might be, why he dies. Really wonderful story.

Alice Goldbloom's avatar

Thank you. You nailed it. We thought we knew him but he remained an enigma. This is 40 years ago and I remember him vividly. Thanks for reading.

Henry Mueller's avatar

We need the semicolon instruction 😜 A great teacher leaves such an impression in our hearts and minds. I was fortunate with three. Two in middle school and one in high school. Ever thankful for each.

Marie Marchand's avatar

Sooo interesting, thank you Alice. Now I know your secret for writing so well 😉

Barbara Goldbloom-Hughes's avatar

Alice, your writing is always elegant and engaging. You are an inspiration to me.

Joe Neuhaus's avatar

To all the semicolon haters out there, let me introduce you to the dash - it's modern, exciting, and visually pleasing.