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Apr 24, 2022Liked by Alice Goldbloom

Lovely, lovely story. thank you!

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Apr 24, 2022·edited Apr 24, 2022Liked by Alice Goldbloom

Beautifully written.

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This is an elegant, mysterious story. I could see you there amid the semicolons, but in the end it felt like fiction of a high order. We don't ever really know who Prof. Browne is, what his motives might be, why he dies. Really wonderful story.

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Apr 24, 2022Liked by Alice Goldbloom

We need the semicolon instruction 😜 A great teacher leaves such an impression in our hearts and minds. I was fortunate with three. Two in middle school and one in high school. Ever thankful for each.

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Sooo interesting, thank you Alice. Now I know your secret for writing so well 😉

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Alice, your writing is always elegant and engaging. You are an inspiration to me.

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To all the semicolon haters out there, let me introduce you to the dash - it's modern, exciting, and visually pleasing.

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